1930's style Train Car
KenG
Traveler
So I'm working on a series of maps based in the 1930's and decided to get some inspiration by drawing up a passenger train car in the style. This was based on some pictures I found on the web.
I want to go back and provide some details to complete the drawing but the bases of the train car.
Please let me know what you think and how I can improve it .
Thanks,
KenG
I want to go back and provide some details to complete the drawing but the bases of the train car.
Please let me know what you think and how I can improve it .
Thanks,
KenG
Comments
1930...its for a Deadlands Noir game?
Can you hide this under a seat please!
I really love textured maps but I'm also a big fan of pure line work and this is very well done.
Some ideas:
1. I'd add some horizontal lines between the wheels to simulate boggies.
2. The lable, I believe it reads "St Louis Express" is hard to decipher. Would it be a breach in authenticity to enlarge the band to allow bigger lettering?
3. All the windows don't show on the top view. Is it intentional?
JdR thanks.
1. What is a "boogie"? Golf or Harry Potter term?
2. Nope bigger is better good idea
3. Not on purpose, and not sure why it is happening . I may need to make bigger windows .
4. I think I will also make a textured version also.
5. Any suggestions on the seats? They look a little bland to me but I guess that is the style.
Thanks again KenG
Learned something new today. So the chassis around the wheels, it makes sense to add them
Thanks Ralf I googled old trains and got a ton of photos snd saw a lot of Pullman stuff.
Next I think ill make up a dinning car.
Like the background you used.
@Sadizm & Ken - I nearly shot my drink out my nose thanks to your little exchange about the Tommy gun. A little warning next time, please!
~Dogtag
Comments always welcome, Thanks,
KenG
Edit. Maybe that is the difference between 1st class and 2nd. Lol
Just noticed something, in the side view there are two buffers (the bits sticking out at the front and back end, I don't know the correct English word).
In the top down view there is only one.
Still very inspiring work KenG.
Thanks for the kind words.
~Dogtag
With a 6 week old and a 2.5 year old I'm lucky to get an hour.
~Dogtag
Here's the updated map
"Passengers will please refrain
From flushing toilets while the train
Is standing in the station. I love you.
We encourage constipation
While the train is in the station.
Moonlight always makes me think of you"
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..
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Sometime in the early 1930s, according to his autobiography, Go East, Young Man (pp. 171-72), William O. Douglas and fellow Yale law school professor Thurman Arnold were riding the New Haven Railroad and were inspired by a sign in the toilet. "Thurman and I got the idea of putting these memorable words to music, and Thurman quickly came up with the musical refrain from Humoresque."
One question, though, and this is an honest question: Isn't it tradition to put a red cross (or, sepia in this case!) on the side of medical vehicles and facilities? Or was that still becoming a convention at this time?
Bravo on another gorgeous addition to your train collection! Brilliant idea and execution.
~Dogtag