Community Atlas - Kimbunga Springs - Chakri Lapu Region
Lorelei
🖼️ 46 images Mapmaker
The Chakri Lapu of Malajuri are a range of active and inactive volcanoes on the northern hook of Malajuri, spotted with a multitude of hot springs of varying temperatures and components (think a bit like the springs of Yellowstone - as that is really all i have as a known comparison) This one pic is the inspiration for my map of a particularly large body of water, and a few crater springs. I give you, Kimbunga (cyclone/tornado) Springs
Comments
Quenten, there is still soooo much left to do here
What style are you using?
Hadrian - it's the DeRust Style Grasslands symbol
Sue, thank you....i figured i'd try something a little different and this picture really inspired me~
I have three suggestions, that might make your artwork look even better.
The first one concerns the island with the Adwoa Ruins: There seems to be a bit of blue underneath the black line belonging to the hill symbol on the right side of the island (where the two trees are). Maybe you could alter the coastline of the island a bit so it fits with the symbol? Also, due to your choice of perspective, one can see the coastline of the island rather well. Because of that, I would suggest adding some sort of coastal environment (beach or cliff). Maybe you could even make it go under water a bit?
The second suggestion concerns the area left of the order of the first monastery: The horizon seems to be a bit lower on this side of the image, than on the left side. Maybe you could add some (semi transparent) mountains to even it out? If you've made this on purpose, because the terrain is supposed to be lower on this side as it seems to be the case on the photo, you could still add an entity that gives an impression of the lands that lie beyond the hills (as in the photo).
And the third concerns the tree size on the far end of the lake: The trees on the left hand side are larger than the ones on the right side, even though they are higher up in the picture, which does indicate that they are further away. Maybe you could rescale either of them?
As said, I really like your artwork. The suggestions are criticism on a very high level and concern nothing but details. If it would be too much trouble to implement them, the map still looked great without them.