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Community Atlas: Kara's Vale, Ethra, Doriant
Level Ten:
Some of the included elements were simply picked from the available symbols in the Mike Schley style, to flesh-out the bare bones original floorplans, although this level was largely populated from items randomly determined from those Story Engine card decks used earlier for the Kara's Vale map locations. The randomness of a level that has stores, an altar and huge braziers, a cage, a pool and a loom just appealed in that way weirdness sometimes can!
Level Eleven:
Which randomness was allowed to spill-over here too, with those three rooms of oddities in the north. Plus, be fair, this was the eleventh level in the group!
Bringing us finally to Level Twelve:
Did I mention the random weirdness? The Wall-Hangings Hall though was done deliberately, because it's a really odd shape for an empty passageway otherwise.
Which concludes the main Tower, leaving only Level Thirteen to come - perhaps next time...
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Community Atlas: Kara's Vale, Ethra, Doriant
Back to the remaining half-dozen Tower levels with Level Seven:
This is the level the magical, golden talisman is on, which is required to activate the portal to access Level Thirteen (coming-up on Level Nine below), and either it or the amulet from Level Two may be needed to regain access to the Tower, if left at any stage. I decided to only wall-off parts of the two outlying cobblestone-floor sections here (derived from the original floorplan), because that helped make this level feel a bit more weird.
Lots of leonine critters in ancient Mesopotamia! The Lion-Headed Eagle though is something special, as it was either a demi-god, or a full-fledged deity (possibly at a period antedating the early 3rd millennium BCE) called Imdugud (later Anzu), which had the form of a giant eagle with heavy claws, a lion's head, and, from at least one myth-text, shining, multicoloured feathers and magical powers.
The Scorpion-Man is a bow or spear-armed humanoid with a human torso, arms and head, set on a chitinous giant scorpion's lower body, legs and stinging tail.
Level Eight:
A fairly straightforward level here for once, except for a couple of floor pit traps in front of two of the treasure chests.
Level Nine:
Here we find the portal that goes to Level Thirteen, which of course is the dungeon map that started this set of maps off. That's dealt with by a separate map in the Atlas now, however. Plus for variety, we also have a non-functioning portal.
The Seven-Headed Mushmahhu probably needs an explanation. It's an imposing, hydra-sized creature with a huge lion's body, and seven, writhing, giant serpent necks and heads. Known from several variant artworks from the early 3rd millennium BCE, sometimes such a creature has a purely serpentine body as well, and in either form, one or more - though not all - its heads may be shown as dead. In its lion-bodied form, it has rays rising from its back, which might be magical defences, or simply fire/heat, which rays seem to form one of its own powers. Sometimes shown with one or two deities in combat with it too. It's basically the top predator in the Tower.
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Community Atlas: Aenos Isle North, Demosthenes Swamp, Artemisia
In this instance, the map layout left irritating amounts of space around the main, almost octopoid, shape of the caverns, so that provided an opportunity to go more to-town with some decorative elements here than usual.
Of course, they could be used too to illustrate where dangers lie on an overland map, using a similar "roundel" look to the Ancient Realms style, for things instead of places, as another example.
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Community Atlas: Aenos Isle North, Demosthenes Swamp, Artemisia
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Community Atlas: Kara's Vale, Ethra, Doriant
Level One here shows the general pattern adopted for all the non-surface Tower levels, where a neutral sheet has been used to hide the exterior surface features of Level Five, presenting a clearer backdrop for all the remaining levels. As there aren't any windows in the Tower, this also helps maintain a degree of uncertainty as to where each level is in relation to its physical place in the Tower, as there is meant to be a degree of confusion about the whole - seriously magical, after all.
The portal to the exterior drops anyone using it into the stone circle west of the Tower on the Level Five drawing - they can't get back into the Tower that way, and may have problems using the main doors without magic, or possession of the amulet or talisman found elsewhere in the Tower.
Lion Demons are strong, disease-bringing, lion-headed humanoids with raptor-clawed feet and legs, and upright donkey ears. This latter gives them powers of strength and alertness, judging by their use elsewhere in Mesopotamian art and some texts.
That flat panel labelled "Kish Warrior" is the marker for one of the nominally Human defenders. Rather than having this be a fully 3D creature, because the Kish, and on subsequent levels Mari, warriors are based on 2D inlay artworks only, I thought it would be fun to have them appear in 2D panels, and then come to life still as 2D creatures as well - albeit ones with human fighting abilities appropriate for the artworks. To clarify, I've added illustrations of such artworks to the PDF notes, that I drew and published in a series of journal articles around a decade ago now, discussing aspects of ancient Mesopotamian warfare. This is the Kish Warrior one:
It was drawn on the computer, because I wanted to better show it fully restored, with the coloured inlay background and the carved and filled bone inlay pieces, as the originals had quite a bit of damage to them.
This is the Mari warrior, a scan of the hand-drawn original on tracing film for the final published version:
Both original artworks date from the earlier 3rd millennium BCE.
Level Two:
This level has the special silver amulet hidden in a treasure chest. The amulet can be used to regain access to the Tower through the surface doors, and it's also essential to gain access to the Tower's Level Thirteen (yes, there IS another Level beyond Twelve - we'll get to that eventually!).
The Bird Man has here been treated as a trickster demi-god, with a human upper body, head and arms, feathered bird's tail, lower body, raptor legs and clawed feet. He is only known from artworks, where most depictions show him captive, apparently being judged by a seated deity, so some liberties have been taken with why this might be so.
Bull Men are humanoid fighters with a human upper body, head and arms, a bull's head horns and ears, bull's lower body, tail and legs. Such a creature has been sometimes thought of modernly as the legendary wild-man companion Enkidu to the hero Gilgamesh, albeit no period texts confirm this.
Level Three:
The Mesopotamian Sphinx isn't quite the sphinx you might think, as it's essentially a human-headed, winged, giant lion. Winged creatures aren't quite so cramped here as might be expected, because each Tower level has a 20 ft ceiling or so (6 m).
Level Four:
On the original "Citadel" floorplans, there were a few carpets shown, which were added here as well, although in the notes, it's mentioned that only this one on Level Four might also be a magical flying carpet, should GMs desire. As might be guessed, the Serpent-Necked Lion is indeed a lion with a long, serpentine neck. Artworks sometimes show pairs with intertwined necks, possibly as a decorative element only.
Level Five we did already, so next is Level Six:
Here, I should probably say what a Lahmu Hero is, and what the difference is between the Sphinx and the Winged Lion-Dragon (also seen on Level Five earlier). The Lahmu Hero is a sword-armed heroic fighter, shown in art with distinctive shoulder-length, curled hair, commonly three curls to either side of their face. They're typically either naked or shown in a simple loincloth, sometimes illustrated having apparently magical control over water and serpents. The Winged Lion-Dragon is a feather-winged lion with feathered giant raptor back legs and tail. Sometimes shown pulling a deity-ridden battle-car or chariot, and sometimes shown breathing something that may be lightning or fire.
The next six levels must wait for another day now though!