Cantebury World Map, WIP, need help!

This is a map I'm making of the planet Cantebury, for the Mech Warrior game I'm running. As you can see, it's not even half finished. I'm working on the island that's smack dab in the middle of the map. It's the one with the tiny island to the immediate south west of it.

Now, I know what most people are going to say about the island. The mountain region is wrong.... Mountains don't form circular ranges. My response would be that the mountain range you see USED to be a massive crater.... something along the lines of a meteor hitting the planet a couple millenia ago... That's not my issue.

My issue is a very deep ravine that is SUPPOSED to be running somewhat parallel to that northern mountain range. A ravine that is about half the depth of the Grand Canyon, and wide enough to build a city the size of New York in. Well, maybe not quite that big... but close. A bit of an explanation. This is the sight of a Inner Sphere War Ship crashed about 400 years prior.... in fact about a quarter of the crashed ship is still there. Where it crashed it left it's own 'crater' that ended up becoming cliffs on either side, then eventually vegetation grew up and over.

The problem is... I can't get a realistic looking ravine.... not one that's wide enough to suit my needs. I tried using cliff symbols, then turning those symbols up side down to represent the south side of the crater. It looked horrible. Plus, I need something that LOOKS like it's not a natural formation of cracks in the ground. The ravine needs to be very straight, as if it was carved out of the landscape.... which of course, it was.

I look forward to any suggestions! Just understand one thing. I don't know the first thing about creating my own symbols!

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  • JimPJimP 🖼️ 280 images Cartographer
    edited May 2018
    The lunar craters i have seen on NASA sites don't have symbols like you tried.

    The ones on the circular crater should work just fine.

    Crater on Earth:

    Lunar crater, Copernicus
  • edited May 2018
    wait.... apparently I didn't explain myself correctly. This warship 'cone' section that crashed... it didn't crash nose down, and create a circular crater. it crashed and slid.... like a plane making a crash landing. So I'm trying to make a crater that's roughly the shape of a hot dog, that's slightly deeper on one end than it is on the other. It's about 200 miles long, and 30+ miles across? more than that... but hopefully that gives a better idea of what I'm trying to create here.


    I think my issue, is that all of the cliff symbols we have, you can make a cliff face south on a map, you can make one face east, or west. But you can't make a cliff in cc3+ that faces north. I need to make my cliffs face each other, to form a ravine.... but the only way to do that... is to turn the symbols upside down... and that just doesn't look right. Let me show you an example of what I'm 'trying' to do.
  • Remember that hike of Valles Marineris I made and posted here ? That is believed, one version, that a very large asteroid did a glancing blow to Mars.

    Here is a side-view of part of that valley.

    Valles Marineris Perspective from Mars Express

    I tried to find some other photos from that European Space Agency but I was unsuccessful in that most sites had adverts on them.
  • LoopysueLoopysue ProFantasy 🖼️ 40 images Cartographer
    Hey Storm :)

    The front edge of such a construction in an isometric map like this would only be a line. Its incredibly difficult to get right unless you are actually drawing the thing like a landscape painting and can use a bit of Bob Ross mist to make it stand out.

    Why not just mark the position of the city with a standard city symbol (it's the map of the entire world, so you wouldn't normally be able to see more than a dot anyway), and when you do the city map (which I presume you are going to do) things will be easier because its a top view map.

    You can use an inverted bevel effect on the city map - like this:

    Its still not perfect, however, because you have to add another level of the land sheet above that bevel sheet to open the end up by hiding some of the wall, and since the houses have to be on top of that second land sheet, they can't actually fall into the shade of the northern cliff or the human eye refuses to believe the illusion.
  • Looks better than my ideas.
  • I thought the same, that the near edge would just be a line. I was trying using a poly for the ravine with a different fill - it's only a rough idea and you'd have to do something clever at the entrance, but this is what I put together just now:
  • you know... that MIGHT actually work... or, at least, it gave me an idea of something that might actually work... thanks!
  • 16 days later
  • The work on this world map continues. I finally managed to figure out something that would work for my canyon. I then realized it probably didn't matter all that much, because by the time everything else is in place, you really don't see it! But I know it's there, and you may see bits of it, so...anyway, it works.

    It may seem a little chaotic when you take a look at the way I'm mapping this world. Usually, I start with my land masses, set up my sea contours, then my land contours. Then I set my mountain ranges, set up my lakes and rivers, then my forests. I decide where other terrain is, such as deserts, arid areas, jungles and such, then I place my inhabited areas, starting with my ports, and working inland. I finish up with any details I've missed, then put up my labels, compass and what not, set my title and be done with it.


    But this was a game I started on the fly. Meaning I came up with the basic story line in two hours, when I was put on the spot one weekend. In fact, this game was only supposed to last THAT weekend... but my players liked it so much they begged me to continue it!


    So this map wasn't even started until after I had run the game for about 3 weeks, and my players were starting to get confused as to where they were, and all. Which means I'm playing catch up. So I'm focusing on those areas where the main play is right now. The island continent with the weird canyon, and the really large continent in the upper right: Sparta and Compton, respectively.


    I've actually finished Sparta. All that's really there, for now, is a military base, and two towns that literally sprang up almost overnight. So now I'm turning my attentions to Compton. Compton has been the poorest of the Dukedoms for the past 30-40 years. The previous Duke has literally been running the whole continent to the ground... and it's population right along with it. But there's a new Duke in town, (one of the players) and he's in the middle of reconstruction... in the true sense of the word. He's rebuilding.


    So, to that end, this map has progressed... it's not complete yet... but it is progressing. Here it is.
  • MedioMedio Surveyor
    Very nice coastline and symbol placement. One silly suggestion, did you try to do the forest symbols a bit smaller? Like on the Eastern continents. I feel they look better than on Western continents.
  • LoopysueLoopysue ProFantasy 🖼️ 40 images Cartographer
    edited May 2018
    I was going to ask why the trees in the west were bigger than the trees in the east. Then I decided to see if it was just me that saw it.

    Is there a reason the trees in the west are bigger than the trees in the east?
  • MonsenMonsen Administrator 🖼️ 81 images Cartographer
    edited May 2018
    Posted By: LoopysueIs there a reason the trees in the west are bigger than the trees in the east?
    That would make for a nice plot in an adventure. :) Maybe it is caused by an ancient artifact, or a playful god, or elven magical experimentation.
    Maybe the people are bigger too (or smaller, depending from which side you are looking from)
  • LoopysueLoopysue ProFantasy 🖼️ 40 images Cartographer
    You mean a bit like Gulliver's Travels?

    That would be neat :)
  • MonsenMonsen Administrator 🖼️ 81 images Cartographer
    I wasn't thinking in those extremes though, more subtle, but still very much noticeable. But, whatever creates a fun adventure works :)
  • LoopysueLoopysue ProFantasy 🖼️ 40 images Cartographer
    LOL! Ok then.

    How about Gulliver's DARK Travels :P
  • except there is no magic in this game... this is a Mech Warrior game. The answer is, I didn't realize I had made them smaller, because I have to zoom so far in to place them. In other words, I screwed up...lol

    This is what happens when you try to fill a night of insomnia with something constructive! Ugh, which means I'm going to have to go back in and fix that... the question is, do I make the west side smaller, or the east side bigger?

    I'll fix the east side... there's less to do. Grrrrrrrrr …….
  • LoopysueLoopysue ProFantasy 🖼️ 40 images Cartographer
    I think the east side looks better, but that's just me.
  • MedioMedio Surveyor
    Mech Warrior? Drools... currently playing on my scarce freetime the Harebrained Schemes games, also played alot of Battletech on early 90s and read most of the core novels.

    Thumbs up!
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