Not signed in (Sign In)

Vanilla 1.1.4 is a product of Lussumo. More Information: Documentation, Community Support.

Welcome Guest!
Want to take part in these discussions? If you have an account, sign in now.
If you don't have an account, apply for one now.
    • CommentAuthorkevbeck43
    • CommentTimeApr 15th 2018
     
    I am really happy with this city. I think I found the balance that I have been looking for. I also think that although this is done in John Roberts style, a very popular style, I think I have found a very simple way to make things unique using the circle tool. I hope you like it and I am looking for critique if anything pops out. Thank you in advance.
      Iron Haven (labeled).jpg
    • CommentAuthorLoopysue
    • CommentTimeApr 15th 2018
     
    That's beautiful :)

    I do like the circular nature of the design.

    Have you considered shortening and sharpening up just a bit) the shadows on the buildings?
    • CommentAuthorLorelei
    • CommentTimeApr 15th 2018
     
    oh this is really nice! I agree with Sue, though, I'd sharpen up the shadows a touch
    •  
      CommentAuthorMedio
    • CommentTimeApr 16th 2018
     
    Looks great! Try to change the water so it flows in the river´s way. Also, put the docks in another sheet and take the shadows out, or make them way smaller. I´d also try to soil a bit the paved roads and squares so it looks even better.

    Apart from those minor things (plus the shadows thing Sue and Lorelei commented) it´s a fantastic map.
    • CommentAuthorShessar
    • CommentTimeApr 16th 2018
     
    Great map! Love how you did the shading for the hills.
  1.  
    Very Nice!