I also have to straighten out some of the outside symbols. I am trying to get all the reserved areas on continents apart from Artemisia done before Xmas. Just Sanctuary Valley in Malajuri, and Truwithiel in Peredur to go.
That looks really nice. I'm a big fan of the Jon Robert's Overland styles. Looks like a painting!
A few thoughts: The title of the map is somewhat difficult [for me] to read, maybe consider a darkened, semi-transparent square behind it? And a whole bunch of fairly large rivers converge at Finren, near the bottom, so maybe consider widening at least the final, merged river?
I really like the lake at the bottom, partially obscured by the mountains. And the heraldic symbols around the frame are a neat touch. I totally want to wander around the region!
Thanks, Dogtag, for your critique - just what I was looking for. I see the point about the rivers, and I will ponder on how to make the title more visible.
I have enlarged the river, fixed the transparent shield background, and highlighted the text a bit more. Oh, and Dogtag, turn on the lights when you look at text!
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A few thoughts: The title of the map is somewhat difficult [for me] to read, maybe consider a darkened, semi-transparent square behind it? And a whole bunch of fairly large rivers converge at Finren, near the bottom, so maybe consider widening at least the final, merged river?
I really like the lake at the bottom, partially obscured by the mountains. And the heraldic symbols around the frame are a neat touch. I totally want to wander around the region!
Cheers,
~Dogtag
Here is the version fixed up. Will this be legible enough? If you say all is OK, then I'll submit it later today.
- Caer Saes
- Dunor Region
Thanks for submitting another great set of maps.