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First Map

ergoergo Newcomer
in Show and Tell
Rather than leave this burried in my question thread here is my first map.



All constructive critisim welcome





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  • jaerdaphjaerdaph Traveler
    Very nice work for a first map! My only suggestion would be to try playing around with effects on the Text sheet. Maybe add a Glow (outer) in a darker color (like a dark brown) to the text to make it stand out more?
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  • SvenSven
    edited November 2009
    Very nice first map. CC3 makes it so darn easy to produce great maps.
    Perhaps you could make the edges of your forests more irregular & have a few trees standing alone a little way from the edge of the forest. Sometimes it is nice to add a separate sheet with a medium brown irregular shape & give it a blur & a transparent effect around the cities as if it was a tilled area.
    Good luck as you create more maps.
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  • Joachim de RavenbelJoachim de Ravenbel Surveyor
    Very good work !
    Posted By: SvenSometimes it is nice to add a separate sheet with a medium brown irregular shape & give it a blur & a transparent effect around the cities as if it was a tilled area
    In the same way I would add a blur effect to the brown areas under the mountains and the green ones under the trees. Perhaps you already did it in that case I would increase the blur radius but keep the strength to 0.
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  • Henrie61Henrie61 Traveler
    No critisism here, like the map.
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